Oshenerth

Oshenerth
by Alan Dean Foster (2015)


An epic fantasy that takes place entirely underwater.
Best friends Chachel and Glint, a merson and a cuttlefish, are returning from a shark hunt when they stumble upon an unconscious female demon. Taking her back to their reef community to recover, while they decide what to do with her, they wind up stumbling into a unique friendship, one which will change their lives and community for better as the reef dwellers and the demon together fight to preserve themselves and their way of life in the face of enemies and their blue magic.


Review
The best think about this novel is the world building. The environments, creatures and characters have been well thought out and generally obey known science (with the notable exception of talking fish). So there is plenty of scope for an interesting story. Unfortunately the one told is a rather conventional human-conflict type which pits mersons against crabs.

There is also an over-indulgence in coming up with new words for things we know about. The character names can sometimes be a bit weird, with no scheme or reason for some and just how pronunciation works can be confusing. The worst part is that the main protagonist, Irina does not have much agency, things just happen to her or she becomes swept along with the action.

It’s well written, while reading you become engaged with the story. Only after finishing did I realize that there wasn’t much to it. This is a long book that could benefit from some editing to pick up the pacing and remove some of the numerous characters.

The book ends abruptly, indicating that a sequel may be coming. I won’t be bothering.